ELMORE LEONARD’S 10 RULES FOR GOOD WRITING
- Never open a book with weather
- Avoid prologues
- Never use a verb other than “said” to carry dialogue
- Never use an adverb to modify the verb “said”…he admonished gravely
- Keep your exclamation points under control — no more than two or three per 100,000 words of prose
- Never use the words “suddenly” or “all hell broke loose”
- Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly
- Avoid detailed descriptions of characters
- Don’t go into great detail describing places and things
- Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip
Leonard’s most important rule that sums up the 10 — If it sounds like writing, rewrite it.
Excerpted from the New York Times article, “Easy on the Adverbs, Exclamation Points and Especially Hooptedoodle”
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