How to Write a Villanelle
by Marjorie Maddox
To write a villanelle, think like a bird
that soars and swoops in seven different ways
then sings a song that you’ve already heard,
returning to its favorite branch to perch.
Become a sparrow—light, and quick, and gray—
to write a villanelle. Think how the bird
salutes you every morning undeterred
from trilling what it always wants to say.
within its favorite song; the one you’ve heard
so many times you suddenly are stirred
to listen closer still, to find the way
to write a villanelle, just like a bird
that flits across your vision in a blur
and leaves the sound of beauty in its trail,
still singing songs that you’ve already heard.
Next time you want to fly away on words,
remember what we talked about this day.
To write a villanelle, think like a bird
that sings a song that you’ve already heard.
SOURCE: “How to Write a Villanelle” appears in Inside Out: Poems on Writing and Reading Poems with Insider Exercises (Finalist Children’s Educational Category 2020 International Book Awards).
IMAGE: Sparrow on a Flowering Branch, circa 1930s, by Ohara Koson (1877-1945).
EDITOR’S NOTE: A villanelle is a 19-line poetic form consisting of five tercets followed by a quatrain. There are two refrains and two repeating rhymes, with the first and third line of the first tercet repeated alternately at the end of each subsequent stanza until the last stanza, which includes both repeated lines.
ABOUT THE AUTHOR: Professor of English and Creative Writing at Lock Haven University, Marjorie Maddox has published 11 collections of poetry—including Transplant, Transport, Transubstantiation (Yellowglen Prize); True, False, None of the Above (Illumination Book Award Medalist); Local News from Someplace Else; Perpendicular As I (Sandstone Book Award)—the short story collection What She Was Saying (Fomite); four children’s and YA books—including Inside Out: Poems on Writing and Reading Poems with Insider Exercises (Finalist Children’s Educational Category 2020 International Book Awards), A Crossing of Zebras: Animal Packs in Poetry and I’m Feeling Blue, Too! — Common Wealth: Contemporary Poets on Pennsylvania (co-editor); Presence: A Journal of Catholic Poetry (assistant editor); and 600+ stories, essays, and poems in journals and anthologies. Forthcoming in 2021 is her book Begin with a Question (Paraclete Press), as well as her ekphrastic collaboration with photographer Karen Elias, Heart Speaks, Is Spoken For (Shanti Arts). For more information, please visit marjoriemaddox.com.
PHOTO: The author with her book Inside Out: Poems on Writing and Reading Poems with Insider Exercises (Finalist Children’s Educational Category 2020 International Book Awards).
I absolutely LOVE this!
This is amazing! thank you! Joan
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On Thu, Feb 18, 2021 at 1:49 PM Silver Birch Press wrote:
> silverbirchpress posted: ” How to Write a Villanelle by Marjorie Maddox To > write a villanelle, think like a bird that soars and swoops in seven > different ways then sings a song that you’ve already heard, returning to > its favorite branch to perch. Become a sparrow—light, and quic” >
As bright and delightful as a bird!
Wonderful!
Terrific! Excellent! Smiling with pleasure.
Lilting, light, actually sounds like birdsong!!
Outstanding! Forward moving, love the enjambment. A difficult form made to look light yet thoughtful.
So clever!