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Laid Away Already in Lavender
Found poem with added punctuation using
Chapter Eight of The Great Gatsby
by Jennifer Finstrom

He had never been in such a beautiful house before:
rose petals blown, the bright luxury of star-shine.

It was a cold fall day with fire in the room.
Even though she was gone from it, redolent
of orchids, pervaded with a melancholy beauty.

Ghostly birds began to sing among the blue leaves.
We pushed aside curtains that were like pavilions,
filling the house with grey turning, gold turning light.

Small grey clouds took on fantastic shapes,
summing up the sadness and suggestiveness of life:
poor ghosts, breathing dreams like air.

But it was all going by too fast now: a hundred pairs
of golden and silver slippers shuffled the shining dust.

IMAGE: “Oui” by George Barbier (1921).

NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR: I love found poetry, but this is the first The Great Gatsby found poem I’ve ever written. It was such a pleasure retyping Fitzgerald’s sentences that I’m certain I’ll return to his work again soon.

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR:


Jennifer Finstrom
 teaches in the First-Year Writing Program, tutors in writing, and facilitates a writing group, Writers Guild, at DePaul University. She has been the poetry editor of Eclectica Magazine since October of 2005, and recent publications include Escape Into LifeMidwestern GothicNEAT, and YEW Journal. She also has work appearing in the Silver Birch Press The Great Gatsby Anthology and forthcoming in the Alice in Wonderland Anthology.

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THE OCEAN
Moby-Dick Erasure Poem
by Thomas R. Thomas

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR:  Thomas R. Thomas was born in Los Angeles and grew up in the San Gabriel Valley west of LA. Currently, he lives in Long Beach, California. For his day job, he is a software QA Analyst. He volunteers for Tebot Bach, a community poetry organization, in Huntington Beach. Thomas has been published in Don’t Blame the Ugly Mug: 10 Years of 2 Idiots Peddling Poetry, Creepy Gnome, Carnival, Pipe Dream, Bank Heavy Press, Conceit Magazine, Electric Windmill & Marco Polo, and the Silver Birch Press Summer Anthology. In November 2012, Carnival released his eChapbook, Scorpio, and Washing Machine Press released a chapbooklette calledTanka. In 2013, World Parade Books will publish a book of his poetry. Visit his website at thomasrthomas.org.

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THE OCEAN

Moby-Dick Erasure Poem

by Thomas R. Thomas

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We are pleased to post the third submission in our call for erasure poems, created with software at erasures.wavepoetry.com. Clint Margrave turned to Herman Mellville‘s classic novel — and Margrave’s favorite — Moby Dick (1851) for source material. (Find the original text here.) The title of the poem (“Loomings”) is also the title of the first chapter of Moby Dick.

LOOMINGS

Erasure poem by Clint Margrave

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR: Clint Margrave lives in Long Beach, California. His first full-length collection of poems, The Early Death of Men, is newly released from NYQ Books. His work has also appeared or is forthcoming in The New York Quarterly, Rattle, Ambit (UK), 3AM (UK), Pearl, Serving House Journal, Word Riot, and Nerve Cowboy, among others. His poetry and prose are featured in the Silver Birch Press Silver Anthology (November 2012), the Silver Birch Press Green Anthology (March 2013), and the Silver Birch Press Summer Anthology (June 2013).

Download Moby Dick for free at gutenberg.org.

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We are pleased to announce the first submission in our call for erasure poems created at erasures.wavepoetry.com. Thomas R. Thomas — whose work also appears in the Silver Birch Press Summer Anthology, available at Amazon.com — submitted the erasure poem below, using a passage from The History of Insects (find the text here) as source material. Thank you, Thomas!

SMALL BEINGS
Erasure Poem by Thomas R. Thomas

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Try it yourself at erasures.wavepoetry.com.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR: Thomas R. Thomas was born in Los Angeles  and grew up in the San Gabriel Valley west of LA. Currently, he lives in Long Beach, California. For his day job, he is a software QA Analyst. He volunteers for Tebot Bach, a community poetry organization, in Huntington Beach. Thomas has been published in Don’t Blame the Ugly Mug: 10 Years of 2 Idiots Peddling Poetry, Creepy Gnome, Carnival, Pipe Dream, Bank Heavy Press, Conceit Magazine, Electric Windmill & Marco Polo. In November 2012, Carnival released his eChapbook, Scorpio, and Washing Machine Press released a chapbooklette called Tanka. In 2013, World Parade Books will publish a book of his poetry. Visit his website at thomasrthomas.org.

For a fun frolic into the world of erasure poetry, visit the wonderful Wave Books site — and create an erasure poem with ease.

Visit erasures.wavepoetry.com.

Below is my humble offering (taken from MOBY DICK by Herman Melville).

ORIGINAL TEXT:
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MY ERASURE POEM, “Moby Money”:
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Try it yourself!

Send in your erasure poems and we’ll publish them on our blog!

Happy erasing!