For the uninitiated, an “erasure” poem is where you take existing text — in the above case, Chapter 3 from The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald — and mark out some of the words to create a poem. Here’s how the above poem reads when it stands alone…
GATSBY SUMMER NIGHT
Through the summer nights
men and girls came and went like moths
and the stars.
I watched his guests
slit the waters of the Sound,
the city scampered
like a brisk yellow bug
eight servants left his back door
in a pyramid of pulpless halves.
At least enough colored lights
to make a Christmas tree
bewitched to a dark gold
so long forgotten
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Learn more about erasure poems at Found Poetry Review.
I never heard of such a thing, but it’s very clever. Thanks for sharing! I’ll be thinking about this with every book I read, now.
That’s so interesting. It wound up a lovely poem. Clever info!
That was awesome, very creative.
Reblogged this on Silver Lake Adjacent.
Thanks to Marcia, Barbara, and Rodger for liking and/or reblogging this post. Please feel free to send us a Great Gatsby erasure poem, which we will be happy to post with your byline.
Lovely!
And Bette, you’re invited to submit a Great Gatsby erasure poem, too!
Excellent work, Cathy.
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